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Contributed by
crimsondream
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Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 02:29:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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your words are floating above my head
wafting away, as fast as can be
refusing to be held tight and cherished
maybe this is why you appeal to me
flying through the ceiling
my heart along with that
leaving me alone with you
alone with this dazed head of mine
must i be such an incompetant fool
only when it comes to you..
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crimsondream
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2004-08-25 02:29:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: no title
(User Rating: 1 ) by artostuff on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 03:28:33 AM AEST (User
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Very nice, a dizzy poem. |
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Re: no title
(User Rating: 1 ) by skyblumoon on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 10:29:15 AM AEST (User
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Brillant! I love it.
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