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Why Use Suicide?
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Sophie_taylor
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Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 11:29:31 PM in AEST
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Why Use Suicide?
I want to meet those poor children
Who felt just like me at times.
I want to know if the pain still burns
And if they would read my rhymes.
I want to know if there was no choice...
If living felt like the way I feel.
I want to hear them tell me, "it's ok,"
That there is hope... still.
I want to see their pale faces,
I want to see their bloody wrists.
I want them to haunt me at night
And push me towards the light with their fists.
I want to hear their stories.
I want them to make me cry...
And wonder how long do I have
'Til the day comes when I die.
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Sophie_taylor
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2004-08-24 23:29:31]
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Re: Why Use Suicide?
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 11:47:45 PM AEST
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| I usually don't read any suicide poetry.... i find it ..... immature. but i did like this, very good. keep it up. |
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Re: Why Use Suicide?
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by oreo_kisses on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 12:34:10 AM AEST
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| i really like this... i see this from both point of views i have temped suicide... numorus times.. and now i am clean for a while... and yeah i dunno i think that its just away for them to escape the pain... i know for me it would help then i would get even more upset with myself.. and then try harder... but i have amazing friends who when relaized what was happening they helped me out and now i am fine... but unsure for how long... lol.. but i really like your poem keep up the good work |
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Re: Why Use Suicide?
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by Sophie_Taylor on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 07:21:02 PM AEST
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Hi everybody, I am Sophie Taylor, the author of this poem. this poem refelects the way i used to feel when my father passed away, i would always blame myself and say it was my fault. I was only 1.5 years old when he passed away but now i am 14 and having councilling whenever i feel suicidal. Thanks for the great reviews and keep them coming.
I have three more poems that i have submitted so if you have time comment on them to and let me know what you think either by email (sophietaylor@dodo.com.au) or through this site.
Thanks
Sophie Taylor
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Re: Why Use Suicide?
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by CrimsonTears on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 10:48:18 PM AEST
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this is an excellent write...i can relate on a certain level...awesome job
Lots of Love
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