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When You Hide Your Frustration
Contributed by
oreo_kisses
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Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 11:05:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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When you hide your frustration
You gather more
The more u gather
The more there is to hide
The more there is to hide
The greater the wall
The greater the wall
The greater the obstacle to get round
Then it all starts al over again
It’s the cycle of life
Who really knows?
Why people allow this to happen
They get all caught up in it
See no way out
Are they scared of life?
And what it will bring you?
Are they just to frighten by everything?
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Re: When You Hide Your Frustration
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 12:02:09 AM AEST
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| This is an excellent poem. that last line is great. awesome write. |
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Re: When You Hide Your Frustration
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by MsScissors on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 03:27:51 AM AEST
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| It is strong and clear. Frusteration always comes from a problem. there's always a solution, Right? |
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Re: When You Hide Your Frustration
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by Pyrofungus on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 02:24:30 AM AEST
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yup i try to hide it and even when i don't it builds a wall but the wall does break, and it has recently...
great job
please comment on my work too
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Re: When You Hide Your Frustration
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by dewy666 on
Monday, 6th September 2010 @ 06:22:32 AM AEST
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What a powerful poem. Everyone will choose to hide over fighting their frustration but it never works out unless there is a vent for you frustration.
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Damion |
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