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poetess me
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 10:59:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i am a lonely poetess
without words to express,
how much writing means to me
like sand calling to the sea,
when i am not home;
there are words in my suitcase,
where ever i may roam,
last night the muses made me wake up
time to write again, which fills me up,
when life overwhelms and i do not know how
the next sun will rise,
i wipe a tear from my eye
writing into the night
until everything's alright,
when everything goes wrong
and days feel so long,
when bills are high, and i have to sigh,
{and i'm too poor to pay attention}
i just let my mind go,
until deep in my soul,
poetry flows into a smile,
then i know all is well for a while,
living high on this misty mountain,
far from cities and trains.
nature is totally awesome,
with the thunder and the rains,
solitude and memories; opportunities
that have knocked on my door,
the 'if onlys' of life as it was once before
writing by candlelight and tears
poetess me, through the years:)
through life's storms and sunny days
poetry always finds a way,
if ever i lost my gift, surely i'd be adrift,
for i need to write,
like the earth needs the sky,
with me my pen goes
whichever way the wind blows...
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 11:32:03 PM AEST (User
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Awwww..lovely write Ness..and the pics...just glorious..... I know how much writing means to you......
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadreckoning1983 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 12:05:39 AM AEST (User
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The poem like the pics are beautiful. did you take those? anyway this was awesome. peace and love. |
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 12:18:40 AM AEST (User
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Thank god, you are awaken again..my dear lady..welcome with hugs...in this poem the "nature is totally awesome, with the thunder and the rains,solitude and memories"and your "writing by candlelight and tears..through life's storms and sunny days"..well expressed my dear poetess..this is a marvellous write. wonderfully touches the heart of all your friends..
I missed you a lot..hugs and love:-) venkat
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 02:07:03 AM AEST (User
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Your passion for poetry comes across beautifully in this write, as does your talent.
Excellent work.
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 02:19:27 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful......... |
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 03:03:26 AM AEST (User
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"like the earth needs the sky,"
I sense this in my development, and I could well imagine my current obsession (enthusiasm, to sound more healthy and sane) and appreciation turning into something akin to yours, over the years.
Lovely write, Nessa. |
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by WinterFawn on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 06:39:59 AM AEST (User
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Those deep stirrings inside come out beautifully in this verse. You are a remarkable poetess with a wonderful gift of writing. Awesome poem and the pictures are breathtaking.
WinterFawn |
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 09:50:53 AM AEST (User
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Ladyfawn, it is so wonderful to have you back in amongst us all again, I have really missed you and your writes *hugs you*
wonderful write,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Aika on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 12:10:17 PM AEST (User
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Fantastic! I was taken to a dream by this write! i really was:-) Like there were no words, but just you :-) Great! with love, aika:-) |
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Angelic_Demon on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 07:25:16 PM AEST (User
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There. Finally read it. :P
Anyway, lol, I love it Mom. And are those pics from the mountain?
Love 'n hugs,
Mars |
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 05:16:04 AM AEST (User
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The photo's reminded me of the farms that I grew up around, they were of better memories Nessa.
You poetry always seems to astound me into silence, You always draw me into your words, so it fel as if Im there, seeing things through your eyes and feeling what you are feeling.
Even this poem had me enraptured from being to end.
Beautifully written Nessa.
Take Care Always
Karl |
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by theMoth on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 03:39:53 PM AEST (User
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Honestly, I can't remember this sentiment in regards to being a poet having been expressed so majestically in regards to personally, poetess. --Mothy |
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 04:51:35 PM AEST (User
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Wow girlfriend,
I think u live in heaven on Earth.
You've discribed the poetess well.
Awesome pictures and thanks for sharing.
I missed ya too.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Merry on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 06:17:16 AM AEST (User
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ohhh Nessa - this is sweet and I can picture you writing as you look out the window at the beauty that surrounds you.
hugs
merry |
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 02:33:58 PM AEST (User
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Nessa no wonder you havent been around this is soooooooo beautiful lovely words and pictures to match from a true friend indeed
hug and Iv missed you
Michelle |
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lee on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 07:24:33 AM AEST (User
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It's the surreal eel y'know feel.
Poetess me is a wonderful title.
The poem is well written on the art of poetry.
Well done! |
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 06:07:24 PM AEST (User
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This poem reminds me of why I write. Thanks |
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 06:53:15 PM AEST (User
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You are the best poetess, friend, lady, woman, and many other adjectives, like my personal favorite, my earthly angel. I wouldn't have made it without you these last few months, Nessa, honestly.
Much love,
Rita |
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 02:26:29 AM AEST (User
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Lovely write that gives me a nice insight of how your muse works... Keep on writing!
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 05:39:35 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful write Nessa, just beautiful.
*****through life's storms and sunny days
poetry always finds a way,
if ever i lost my gift, surely i'd be adrift,
for i need to write,
like the earth needs the sky,
with me my pen goes
whichever way the wind blows...
Thank you Nessa, you just wrote a beautiful poetic autobiography
So now I will narrate this poem to you Nessa and to all poets who read.
Huggs to you Nessa and to all of YPDC out there.
Raquel Leah (poetess) ; ))
Nessa, we poets out here, your brothers and sisters
We too realize this gift of writing
The attribute of our power, purified
Much gain of strength, a second life on paper
We are all the mighty heroes, Nessa for all our poems and stories are admired
We came to stand at the foot of YPDC and bow with great respect to Mick
Our genuine writes are our birth, not death
True appearances of our lives are penned
And just like the sun that shines up above
Each word was created searching for love, expressing our love, being in love, or finding a way out of pain
And although sometimes our writes are not easy
We really do not need to explain
Why some writes are cutting, others cling to us
While some just show wonderful miracles
Since I am not the most perfect writer
Sometimes my punctuation is bad, and hey, Sometimes it won't rhyme
But just like your writes, I can tell, arise from the heart
And I am not an actor, or actress
Nor a musician or a singer
Although I do it all on paper
Where I dream
Some of my dreams I write are happy, some are nightmares
Still I will not suffer when I know in a good way
I hold this gift like you Nessa, good or bad results Somehow this joy of writing relieves our pain
So Nessa, you and I and other poets out here will Will pen away our suffering until it no longer exists
As long as we have the heart to write
The agony of this world will cease
Because our rising nature
Is to separate good from the bad
Even if its written light or dark
The paper page will never be empty or starve
I have faith in myself, and in other writers too
That our hearts are fed, and never will decay
As long as we have our moments power to write
Revealing all of our truths we are never ashamed
Because we are writers that create
And when all is examined
We are proud to say
Thank you for your comments
This poem was the miracle of my day
RLPoetess 8-30-2005
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by remote on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 03:15:23 PM AEST (User
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What can I add, all the wonderful things are already said. Lovely pictures too. |
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 11:09:24 AM AEST (User
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Oh Nessa, so very late I happen to see this your unique write about writing.
Yes Poetess, we are urged to write, - strange that some of our best work arises at a moment of loss and utter devastation in grief.
It's a Higher Power that drives us to write and lay bare our innermost feelings. And it is this Higher Power also that touches the hearts of the readers. as this wonderful work of art does.
Thank you for followig the dictates of the Higher Power and sharing it with us.
Love and peace
Elizabeth |
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by colinb on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2014 @ 02:21:24 AM AEST (User
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Outstanding write Nessa |
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Re: poetess me
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 3rd November 2014 @ 12:07:15 PM AEST (User
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So beautiful. I share many of these thoughts with you, and writing does seem to be the healing balm my soul requires. Exceptional write, it holds up from start to finish.
~Scorp |
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