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he died holding me
Contributed by
taintedorange21
on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 09:36:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i see you layin there
still my tough boy with no fear
still that smile that caught my eye
i'm so lost without you in my life
don't leave me now
the years flew by so fast
they were perfect
now i'm watching you pass
it's so much harder to breathe
without you smiling at me
last night was the last time you said i love you
then he said soon you'd be gone from me
he told me to say goodbye and just breathe
i only wanted to be held by you
so i climbed in the bed
wrapped your weak arms around me
watched you slowly stop breathing
and your eyes start to close
and i whispered so gently
as my face touched your nose
i'm in your arms forever
just don't let me go
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Re: he died holding me
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by waos on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 09:52:50 PM AEST
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| That was so sad, oh my goodness if i was the crying type i'd be bawling. you did such a good job of putting that all into words.. congrats there. *kudos* i'll be reading some of your other stuff for sure. keep it up. |
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Re: he died holding me
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 10:24:13 PM AEST
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| amazing write. i agree with waos. |
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Re: he died holding me
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by CaddishCut on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 10:25:58 PM AEST
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| That is very sad. It brought a tear to my eye. Beautifully written as well |
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Re: he died holding me
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by carmen_queasy on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 08:39:25 AM AEST
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| I forgot to breathe reading this poem. It's painful and beautiful at the same time. Amazing poem. |
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Re: he died holding me
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by BurnedRose on
Thursday, 22nd November 2007 @ 08:45:02 AM AEST
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| That was sad, moving, emotional, and beautiful at the same time. |
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