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drown me
Contributed by
taintedorange21
on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 09:18:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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your love surrounds me
like the air i breathe
i suffocate in you
and there's no need
to bring me up for air
not when i'm drowning in you
give me everything there is of you
from stormy rivers to the oceans blue
no waves to dangerous no act too rude
i'm dyin to drown
dyin to drown in you
i feel the break of light
upon my face
a drop of your love
and i can't take
everything you have to offer me
don't keep me floating let me sink
give me everything there is of you
from stormy rivers to the oceans blue
no waves too dangerous, no act too rude
i'm dyin to drown
dyin to drown in you
do my oceans meet yours
do you feel the rain pour
from my lake to your shore
please
let
me
drown
in
you
i'm
beg-ging
for
your
dark
blue
let
me
hit
that
ocean
floor
so
i
can
breathe
in
you
so give me everything there is of you
from stormy rivers to the oceans blue
no waves too dangerous i'm beggin you
give me one night of that
deep
dark
blue...
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... [
2004-08-24 21:18:50]
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Re: drown me
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by waos on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 10:03:10 PM AEST
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| i absolutely adore how you word things, that was just as good as the other one i read of yours.. dude i'm just gonna go down the list of yours.. thanks for posting i really liked it. |
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Re: drown me
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 10:28:57 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. =] |
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Re: drown me
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by jessadawn on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 07:10:45 PM AEST
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| I loved this poem...it was really awesome. You really put emotion into your poetry....Nice. :) |
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