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Let me know
Contributed by
silverjade
on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 09:08:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I admire you from afar
but i feel you within
making me whole
feeling complete
Ive caught your eyes before
but not like yours captivated me
captured
and now Iam bound
tho this endless dance
of wonder and misery
waiting for you
to even glance this way
waiting for your heart to come my way
do you even notice me?
Iam I there?
if you do then please stare
give me a smile
a simple smile
and let me know Iam there
let me know you care.
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2004-08-24 21:08:36]
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Re: Let me know
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by TheVoice on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 10:20:30 PM AEST
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Very nice write.
I hope you get that look that lets you know they see the beauty that is YOU.
The Voice
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Re: Let me know
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 10:39:45 PM AEST
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| This is a beautiful piece of work. Here and there I saw a typo, and it distracted me from the lovely work, but that's fixed so easily. Good job. |
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