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walk around the world
Contributed by
truthlessheroes
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Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 08:41:56 PM in AEST
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I walk around this world of loneliness
wishing there was time for more fun.
I look up to the black sky
and I try to run
I look back at all the things chasing me
I look at all the people problems and guns
I'm trying to run away from it all
but im not getting very far
They just keep getting closer to me
And it's making it harder to run.
I wish I had someone to help me through it all
I want someone who wont leave me behind
I want someone who's sweet, gentle, and kind.
Are you the one?
Will you always be there when im being chased?
Will you be there and hold me tight?
They keep getting closer to me.
Im running as fast as I can.
Come with me and be with me
We will do this together
You and I for a lifetime.
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2004-08-24 20:41:56]
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Re: walk around the world
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by AbnormalPunk on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 08:46:11 PM AEST
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| oh what could i say about such a glorious poem... the form... the rythym... its almost like a bad eminem song.... lol... jk... i love this thing dude... it has AWESOME rythym... and the words are fantastic... keep em comin bro |
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Re: walk around the world
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 08:58:07 PM AEST
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| excellent write. i agree with the other comment. too bad my firsts dont look as great as this. i dont think mine even now can compare. keep up the good work =] |
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