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wet dream
Contributed by
neveryours
on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 08:25:31 PM in AEST
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her breath, warm,
sticky sweet
jolly rancher and comet
wipes away what's left of love
in one backhanded swipe
and smiles
Her green eyes say
"I've won"
Her lips glisten
I reach for her face
and find my hands are numb
my legs unable
glow turns to surprise
intensity to desperation
as I realize her eyes are true
and my body gone
I shudder awake
to find myself whole
left only with cold
comet traces
of my dream
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2004-08-24 20:25:31]
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Re: wet dream
(User Rating: 1 )
by AbnormalPunk on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 09:03:42 PM AEST
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| dude this thing was hysterical... i dunno if thats what you wanted it to be... but i LOVED it... lol.... keep em comin... |
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Re: wet dream
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by sheri on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 02:28:55 AM AEST
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| Not sure what about this, very interesting and amusing. All in all good job.lol |
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Re: wet dream
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 08:28:19 PM AEST
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| umm..you insulted my poetry and I wanted to see If I need to worry..LOL..no problem..you need to get rid of one of your accounts.. |
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