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Tranquil Chaos Surrounding The Unborn Child

Contributed by abnormalpunk on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 07:04:19 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

you say its not murder to kill something not living
but what if the victim is left defensless
would you then give it a chance to at least run
no, you'd still stab at it, killing it sensless

if children that are paralyzed cannot breath on their own
are they dead to you, like an embryo in a mothers womb
are really thinking about what you are doing
but putting an unacknowledged soul in an early tomb

when you practice your works on the insides of women
do you think of the kids that died of natural causes like aids
or is all that you care about in this world
making money by cutting "lifeless flesh" with your blades

if you were the baby in the womb at that moment
the moment where the babies life becomes an endless dream
do you think that you would be dead for a fact
if thats true, then why do they call it the silent scream

pain is pain, and life is life, you selfesh fools
they can feel the knives and they do really die
but to you its okay, you live your lifes on
by doing what you know to do best, lie

betrayal of a mother is the costliest curse
and you encourage mothers to forsaken their young
but do you take into account your own life
and what a barren desert your hearts become

if life means nothing to you when you go to work
why dont you just kill yourself in while at home
so that way children can be born to breath
and you can be happy when you die alone

Copyright © abnormalpunk ... [ 2004-08-24 19:04:19]
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Re: Tranquil Chaos Surrounding The Unborn Child (User Rating: 1 )
by Flipped_out on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:44:54 AM AEST
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Jer..

A very controversial subject indeed. and Bravo for taking it on so damn well. this brought a lump to my pretty emotionless self. I am so anti-abortion I could write an essay. and you manage to say so much here in these few verses. I have no negative comment, or correction to add to this masterpiece

Awesome

Kelly xx

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