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Memory of the Demon
Contributed by
DarkFey
on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 05:12:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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She was young her beauty in full bloom.
The year of our lord 1792. Dressed in a
frock against the chilly night air. She
walked out the door. Her mother needed
her there.
The new moon had risen. She looked about
the blackness in despair. It made her
apprehensive, she usually went without
a care. But her heart told her something
lie in wait out there.
Not going far her blood ran cold with dread.
An unatural voice whispered in the trees up
ahead. Come to me, the only words it said.
Her body dripped sweat and urine ran down her
legs.
Laughter rang out as the demon caught the scent.
This was all it needed knowing it's victim was
spent. He went to her then, as her mind rushed
away. Madness slipped in swiftly, taking rein.
A filthy hand clutched her neck in jubilant glee.
His fingers tracing the vein, that he loved tenderly.
Teeth plunging deep as he drank heartily. Then
dropping her body, an empty husk with no need.
The year of our lord 2003. The demon sat there
smiling. He had many good memories indeed.
Copyright ©
DarkFey
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2004-08-24 17:12:19]
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Re: Memory of the Demon
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 05:22:19 PM AEST
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you should have posted this under dark poetry, it is an amazing write,
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Re: Memory of the Demon
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by arden on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 12:56:06 PM AEST
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ok first thought i had was "hmm this seems to be really interesting" second thought i had was " whoa nice and chilling really creepy" then at the end i laughed lol
this was a great poem. it told a really good story. sorry but i found the end funny lol
but i loved this. and i have to agree with pixie this does belong under dark poetry.
but this was amazing.
great work.
5 stars
Arden |
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