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Lady Death
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 04:05:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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lurking the allyways
aghast with blood
a dying soul
lingers
the need to kill
ever stronger
overpowering
i hunt
i am Lady Death
gothic beauty
in a swirling
blackness
for my sacraficial pleasures
i find my victem
to satisfy
hunger
drill nails into his hands
pinning him to the floor
his screams
echo
a maliciouse laugh follows
as i claw out his eyes
leaving them
raw
take up my blade
percision slicing
along the
bone
a laugh in pure malice
he crys in pure pain
i tear at his fleash
deliciouse
when shall i finnish
or havent i just
began with
cruelty
i should put him out of his misery
take up my sorrows
into his chest
pull out his
heart
it feels so warm inside his chest
beating in the opn air
i work quickly
to get it
and as suddenly as it began it is over
and he is dead
now among
lost souls
the souls who follow me
gaze connected
to my evil
wrath
i leave his body to the rats
as i take up my leave
and head south
into hiding
taking with me
the evil and death
that hung silently in the air
and another dead and forgotten soul
Copyright ©
TwEeK
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2004-08-24 16:05:49]
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Re: Lady Death
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 04:13:28 PM AEST
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wow, a very dark write, well expressed with great flow,
pixie xx |
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Re: Lady Death
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by Alina on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 05:32:12 PM AEST
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That was a very seroius write. i don't know what to make of it much. But none the less you did a MAGNIFICANT job!! I like all of your poems. You are very talented.
ALINA |
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Re: Lady Death
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by DarkFey on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 08:46:59 PM AEST
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| Creative, dark and awesome!! Great write really liked it, DarkFey |
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