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in a box
Contributed by
zeroelysium
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Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 02:00:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I’m feeling rather walled in
avoidance , isn’t that a sin
can you even just start to begin
caring
in a box I locked myself
but I left the key out
you don’t seem to hear
that I knock
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2004-08-24 14:00:03]
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Re: in a box
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 02:14:07 PM AEST
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very emotional write,powerful words..."you dont seem to hear that I knock" great lines,
takecare
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Re: in a box
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 06:43:45 PM AEST
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hey kid just remember that mom loves you
Shari |
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