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Wistful Glance
Contributed by
stevo7
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Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 01:28:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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/ Wistful Glance /
These are such times when life is viewed,
through wistful glance of past glad grace;
Invest our hearts with love renewed,
for kindred souls our thoughts embrace.
S.R. Bloodworth 14Feb94
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Re: Wistful Glance
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vitreous_Soul on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 05:08:40 PM AEST (User
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I find it a bit perplexing that more people haven't commented on your work--it's very good. Although a bit on the short side (but who's to say that's a bad thing?), you describe the scene perfectly. Very nice rhyme, and overall a memorable poem.
Gouged in the eye with a rapier,
-V.S. |
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