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Fallen Angel
Contributed by
theraven
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Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 01:18:01 PM in AEST
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A golden halo
Surrounds your lovely body
Overwhelming sight
We?ll see over time
What love really means, to kiss
You sounds like a start
Not too fast, nor slow
Just want to have fun with you
And your body too
-The Raven-
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Re: Fallen Angel
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 01:56:53 PM AEST
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beautiful write Raven , or is it Mr. Raven? lol
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Re: Fallen Angel
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by BrandySwanson on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 07:10:14 PM AEST
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great haikus { now if I can ever learn how to write one myself lol.}
Brandy |
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Re: Fallen Angel
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 05:26:56 PM AEST
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| good haiku. |
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