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Nothing's Untitled
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 11:31:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Underneath
the darkness
opens a blackness
so cold
and endless.
A pit
based on illusions
of tragedy,
a point so vivid
and vacant...
empty
and
a chromatique setting
filters throughout.
Despair
settles in the
undertoe
of faith,
and apathy blankets the world.
Copyright ©
Inevitable
... [
2004-08-24 11:31:44]
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Re: Nothing's Untitled
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 11:46:24 AM AEST
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| negativity...I relate to this very well...a whirlpool I feel myself getting sucked down into... |
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Re: Nothing's Untitled
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by artostuff on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 12:49:47 PM AEST
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| I like it. If it where a image i'll call upon paints by John Martin. |
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Re: Nothing's Untitled
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by DarkFey on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 01:31:14 PM AEST
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| I think we have all been there and can relate. Thats what I like about this write. Good use of word structure! Good job, DarkFey |
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