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Someday
Contributed by
rebelshorty0418
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Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 10:16:46 AM in AEST
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Someday
Words can't explain
What you mean to me
I love you so much
Why can't you see
I would do anything
To make you love me too
The problem is
I've done all I can do
When I try to get closer
You push me farther away
But I keep trying
Each and everyday
All I need from you
Is one simple Sign
And maybe someday
You'll be mine!!
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Re: Someday
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 10:21:28 AM AEST
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| your words express the way I feel about someone...I really like this. |
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Re: Someday
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by Alina on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 12:50:04 PM AEST
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Well, I agree with the above
comment.... you did express
yourself well.... but honestly,
you can't really know how to
love in two weeks. Love grows
it doesn't just come and go. At least
that's my opinion. Anywayz.... keep on
trying.
Alina |
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Re: Someday
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by hopelessromantic on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 12:56:41 PM AEST
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| You can't really know how he feels in 2 weeks love does grow over time. Don't try to push him cuz if u do he might push u farther away just let things grow between u two. Good Luck. The poem is also very good. |
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Re: Someday
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by Broken921 on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 06:00:08 AM AEST
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| This hits home with me !! I feel this way !! Great poem |
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