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Winter Pleasures
Contributed by
amber1988
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Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 08:35:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Holiday Poetry
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Peaceful, calm and always so pretty
with all of the snow allay on the ground,
People are walking all bundled up
while looking and gazing in aw all around.
With the sun beating down on the snow below,
Making it a winter wonderland aglow.
Just like a christmas tree alight like a fire,
Looks the ground with all of its dazzling attire.
All of the roads and sidewalks are covered
so people are out trying to shovel it clear,
Just waiting until the very next fall
of the beautiful snow for this year.
And oh what a sight it is when it snows,
So beautiful and dazzling as everyone knows.
As kids all you want is a snow day,
So then you can go out and play.
Go sledding and ice-skating and have a snowball fight,
Until your parents call you in because it's turned night.
Then you sit by the fire and drink your hot cocoa,
and think all about what you'll do tomorrow.
Copyright ©
amber1988
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2004-08-24 08:35:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Winter Pleasures
(User Rating: 1 ) by CaddishCut on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 09:23:52 AM AEST (User
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Oh I like this. I'm not one for winter, and you were able to describe it and make me think how pretty it really can be. Great write |
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Re: Winter Pleasures
(User Rating: 1 ) by artostuff on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 09:31:51 AM AEST (User
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I enjoyed reading this. I really like winter. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Winter Pleasures
(User Rating: 1 ) by a_bear on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 10:31:01 AM AEST (User
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I'm sitting in an air-conditioned house, it's 108 outside...sand and desert all around...but I have the sense of a winter wonderland and I can smell pine trees and I want to bundle up!!!! Wonderful!!!! (mary) |
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Re: Winter Pleasures
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 11:54:26 AM AEST (User
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Very good read here..
AfterDark.. |
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Re: Winter Pleasures
(User Rating: 1 ) by vicimgd1 on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 05:32:17 PM AEST (User
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Wonderful. I love winter, and you describe it so beautifully. |
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