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PEACE
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 07:49:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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"PEACE"
Peaceful lull, hush--no sound
Stands alone, tranquility bound.
Solemn, silent, stillness blue hue
So quiet--sense the value!
Upon life's stage, no applause.
No longer weary, no harmful cause
Peace of heart,
Peace of soul,
Peace of mind,
Pondering thoughts very kind.
One might hear a feather
Float-gliding gentler.
Take your bow, lifetime hour
Shhhhh.......be still, devour!
Embracing arms,
Comforting warm charms
Amity with oneself, harmony.
Storm of life....fought calmly
'Tis the Golden Years.....
Untroubled, mastered all fears.
Curtain calls have at last ceased
Nothing to prove, security unleased!
Center stage.....mind, soul, heart
Final bow, no new part.
Grateful mind,
Grateful soul,
Grateful heart,
Acts over, life's an Art!
Created by
LovingCritters
ConSue
August 24. 2004
"Life is a banquet, and most poor
suckers are starving to death!"
~Auntie Mame, by Patrick Dennis~
*Peaceful Tranquil Smiles*
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Re: PEACE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 08:04:48 AM AEST (User
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wonderful write
blissful
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Re: PEACE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 09:06:11 AM AEST (User
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The word "peace" has so many meanings for me and you touched upon so many in this poem.
Falling asleep at night and resting with nothing on my conscience is peace to me. I could ramble on and on (as I normally do) but I think i'll just say that this poem was comforting to read.
More importantly though is the fact that you are at peace with your life and the way you have lived it.
Loved this one ConSue.
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Re: PEACE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Aika on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 09:41:11 AM AEST (User
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very powerful write, Connie! so touching:-) With love, aika:-) |
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Re: PEACE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 12:27:39 PM AEST (User
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Another fine write, Connie !! And a beautiful picture to accompany it as well. Gorgeous.
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: PEACE
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 12:44:31 PM AEST (User
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this made me feel so calm Conni teach me how to not regret a moment of this life and be so calm I would love that total inner peace all of the time just like you beautiful
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Re: PEACE
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 01:01:21 PM AEST (User
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wow, a very peaceful and lovely write , wonderful Consue,
love
pixie xx |
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Re: PEACE
(User Rating: 1 ) by AspenGlow on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 03:51:09 PM AEST (User
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Very beautiful poem and the picture is a dream.
Perfect picture of peace...so quiet and still.
how I do long for the long winters blanket of pure white snow...not a footprint or trace and the sparkle that mirrors the heavens.
thank you for sharing this. it is perfect.
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Re: PEACE
(User Rating: 1 ) by BrandySwanson on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 07:23:20 PM AEST (User
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very beautiful and touching write great job love it
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Re: PEACE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Whisper on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 08:03:36 PM AEST (User
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That is beautiful and the picture is the perfect touch.
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Re: PEACE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 04:23:13 PM AEST (User
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Peace from the inside that shines for all to see from the outside.
Stitch |
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