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devotion
Contributed by
Dizza_13
on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 05:14:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Take my love my dear,
And hold it close to your heart,
For now all things are clear,
And nothing could tear us apart.
Take my love sincere,
From the deepest of my heart,
You shall have no fear,
For we shall never part.
Crimson tears we have both wept,
Our love for each other we have both kept,
Once we were alone and broken,
Feelings inside that were never spoken,
Our love will last always,
And set our hearts ablaze.
Copyright ©
Dizza_13
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2004-08-24 05:14:22]
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Re: devotion
(User Rating: 1 )
by amber1988 on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 08:19:31 AM AEST
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| this is a great poem. it really tells the person that you love them and are truely devoted to them. it made me think of me and my boyfriend. it was great. |
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Re: devotion
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by artostuff on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 03:29:32 AM AEST
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I like this, its a great read!
your words grip fleeting wounds,
of days when scarlet tears blooded
my sleeves...for this I Thank you. |
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Re: devotion
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 04:27:35 AM AEST
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Im not really one for romantic styled poetry, yet I found this very emotional, and actually made me stop and read. which is abit of a feat in itself.
As usual you have such a way of writing, it aways leaves me in astounded, you have an awesome talent Dizza, and you will go along way in life.
Take Care always
Kindragon |
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