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i miss you
Contributed by
Dizza_13
on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 04:48:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Lost and alone I have been since you’ve gone,
When you went away my life was forlorn,
Broken and torn is now all I feel,
Wounds that only you can heal,
How I miss you my dear,
How I wish that you could be here,
You were my light,
Now all around there is only night.
I miss you,
I miss all the things you say,
I miss the things that you do,
I miss the way you act each and every day.
My heart is aching,
But I’ll be here waiting,
I’ll still love you,
Even when our days are few,
Alone and broken I may feel,
But just thoughts of you give me zeal.
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Dizza_13
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2004-08-24 04:48:24]
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Re: i miss you
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 06:05:50 AM AEST
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I really liked your poem alot. You expressed missing someone (the emotional aspects) so clearly.
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Re: i miss you
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by artostuff on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 03:33:39 AM AEST
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| I like this, such a show of rooted emotion. A good write. Thank you for sharing your plight. |
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