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Go Away
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
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Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 01:04:21 AM in AEST
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I'm tired of the games you play
Messing with me day after day
I didn't want it
I told you no you twit
But you didn't listen, or at least didn't care
You gave me more than just a scare
You took away my innocence
But still expect deliverance
You think this is something I can forgive
Something i can deal with and live
Well that, ex-lover, is where you are wrong
So get out of my sight, just get gone
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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2004-08-24 01:04:21]
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Re: Go Away
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 08:39:22 AM AEST
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Phew loads of pent up emotions in there Kie
Well said though well written
Wonderful poem
Love SweetAngelukxxxx |
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Re: Go Away
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by linagalMBfan01 on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 10:49:27 AM AEST
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lots of emotion in just a few words only some
good writers can do that. this was a good write and no one else take offense to that comment please. heh heh
lina |
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Re: Go Away
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by AspenGlow on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 03:16:24 PM AEST
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Very powerful write.
Thank you for sharing. |
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