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Anothers Final Breath
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 11:07:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Take the blade and cut your skin
Your skin just seems so paper thin
Cut right down into the bone
Just ignore your silent moan
Bite your tongue to stop the scream
No, I’m sorry this is not a dream
You bite so hard you start to bleed
Taste the warm blood, that you feed
Now you crave blood like a vampire
That warm crimson will fill your desire
Suck your blood from where you cut so deep
It feels so good you begin to weep
Now your blood is not good enough
Finding other pray might be tough
Around the town you search all night
Guided by the moons bright light
Find a stranger walking in the park
Pull him deep into the dark
Sink your teeth into his skin
Worry not he’ll forgive your sin
Bury him deep into the ground
But be sure he’ll never be found
Now fly deep into the sky
Your dark cravings won’t let you die
Now your left to live this way
Walking the nights looking for pray
Celebrate your life with death
Taking another’s final breath
Copyright ©
CrimsonTears
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2004-08-23 23:07:53]
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Re: Anothers Final Breath
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by shelby on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 11:27:09 PM AEST
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where is it you live? Im gonna cover my neck when I leave the house very good vampire write once again!
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Re: Anothers Final Breath
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by vampyrekiss on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 08:46:11 AM AEST
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that was super i liked the way it flowed umm yup
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Re: Anothers Final Breath
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by skyblumoon on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 01:40:05 PM AEST
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Very powerful. Reading this was like watching a movie. I could see it all happening before my very eyes. Very vivid write.
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Re: Anothers Final Breath
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by EternalNight4x on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:48:07 PM AEST
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| wow very creative and well written...i greatly enjoyed this keep posting |
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