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Gotta let go
Contributed by
all4him
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Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 07:51:23 PM in AEST
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i dont know what to do no more
I dont know what to say
I dont know how i feel
Cause you keep playin me this way.
I wanna be with you
But then again I dont
I wanna hold you close
But deep inside it hurts.
I wanna cry right now
But i know i wont stop.
for these things you do to me
is tearing me apart.
I wish you could only see
That we are ment to be.
I wish you'd only see
im no better then thee.
I hate to end it now
after everything i've done
What can i do
Im not gettin any where?
I have to stop trying
I have to give up
For all this pain
Has to be enough
It hurts me more to let you go
What else am i to do?
If your not willing to let me in
this has got to be the end.
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Re: Gotta let go
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by emystar on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 07:59:14 PM AEST
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Greatly written and many times I've had to do the same.
Good work even tho sad.
Hang tuff and keep the faith.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Gotta let go
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by rhyme_me_to_sleep on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 08:30:51 PM AEST
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Its hell to be played, if they can't return it then they don't deserve it.
great write. |
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Re: Gotta let go
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by CaddishCut on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 09:46:48 PM AEST
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| I said similar things to my boyfriend when I broke up with him. It was and still is very hard to deal with the fact that you have to let that one go. |
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Re: Gotta let go
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 10:29:40 PM AEST
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| amazing and heartfelt write. you were strong enough to make the decision you are strong enough to see it through. =] |
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Re: Gotta let go
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by positivelypurple on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 01:19:02 AM AEST
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| Hmmm - I am going through something similar right now. It is torcher. Nice write! |
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