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Pull the Trigger
Contributed by
Nyx
on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I want to find my wrists with a razor
I want my head to make friends with a bullet
Give me a bottle of pills. i want to go to sleep.
I'm going to abandon life; jump out of the plane.
Shove the pain down my throat to poison me.
It's killing me from the inside.
The blood in my veins has dried up
Why haven't I been embalmed?
I'm already dead.
Make it final and give me my funeral.
I'm tired of pretending to live.
Copyright ©
Nyx
... [
2002-11-02 23:00:00]
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Re: Pull the Trigger
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 11:11:57 PM AEST
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This really hit home
with me, i know exactly
what this feels like
Keep em' coming
i want to read more
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Pull the Trigger
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by Poetic_Angel on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 02:06:45 AM AEST
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| good poem. if you do feel this way, you shouldn't because whther you believe it or not, you are on earth for a reason. good job! |
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Re: Pull the Trigger
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by norticus on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 03:12:48 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed this, because there is so much misery in it. I hope you continue to write while you can from this place of sadness. I give this a 3.99 on the Nortiscale. |
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Re: Pull the Trigger
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 06:25:46 AM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc.. I'm glad you wrote this poem because it means you didn't pull the trigger.... Hang in there...it will get better...
Jenni |
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