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So I Dream
Contributed by
Am
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Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 05:16:10 PM in AEST
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I wish I was an angel
You know-
The kind people believe in
Even though you can never see them
That way I could help people
Never hurt anyone
Never get hurt
Never watch your life slowly dissolve
Always do the right thing
Never mess-up
Live forever
Be externally & internally beautiful
I know it can't happen
So I dream.....
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Am
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2004-08-23 17:16:10]
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Re: So I Dream
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by Kitty_cat on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 05:45:16 PM AEST
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That poem was amazing. I feel very like that but I never looked at it that way - angel. I don't think it matters that it doesnt rhyme, it still flows and is a wonderful poem.
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Re: So I Dream
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 11:53:10 PM AEST
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Kitty_cat is right....the flow is very good..and poems need not rhyme....
Lovely write..well done...keep on dreaming
Jenni |
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