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I know
Contributed by
Am
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Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 05:04:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I know-
It's your mine that needs to expand
So you can understand
How I can laugh with all these tears in my eyes
How I can spot even the smallest bit of truth in your lies
I painted on a smile
Just to make your time with me worth-while
If you saw the real me
You'd be outta here instantly
Copyright ©
Am
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2004-08-23 17:04:37]
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Re: I know
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by n2dep2care on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 04:23:40 PM AEST
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Vary sad and haunting poem. I like this.
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Re: I know
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by Somnium on
Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 03:53:39 PM AEST
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Very haunting and melancholy,
you captured alot of feeling into
just 9 lines.
Well done
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