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Reality Stopped The Monsters!
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 03:49:41 PM in AEST
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Teary eyed I walked the earth,
Searching for some place I could lift my curse.
But the shadows walked with me,
Making sure I couldn't be free.
And my dark clothes pulled me down more,
And until I couldn't find a reason any more.
I felt like nothing but a walking corpse,
And that night, I felt more grudge and remorse.
I felt like nothing but a soulless ghost,
As light glowed through me as I pasted the lamp post.
And I had to have another glance at every thing for a second time.
To be sure they weren't monsters watching me on that dark night.
I felt so paranoid when others past yet look through me.
I felt so empty like a dead human being.
... But then I heard my foot steps on the ground.
And they spoke to me with their own little sounds.
And suddenly the voices clang to me,
Saying how others feel this same misery.
And some how I knew I couldn't be dead.
As I watched the monsters float around my head.
So suddenly I blinked! To find they were gone.
... So I opened my eyes, and above my head the silver moon shone...
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Re: Reality Stopped The Monsters!
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 03:58:34 PM AEST
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aww so brilliantly written
i use to be scared of monsters,visions inside my head
but now i got use to them...ready to rejoin the dead,
its brilliant how one blink changes a lifetime
and wipes the dark to clear the night sky for the bright silver moon...:)
thank you
love han xx |
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Re: Reality Stopped The Monsters!
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by skyblumoon on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 01:25:13 PM AEST
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Wonderful write. Reality is a great wonder.
Blu |
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Re: Reality Stopped The Monsters!
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:43:24 PM AEST
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| Nicely done. It really holds the reader's attention. |
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