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Apathy will not win you freedom.
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 02:51:36 PM in AEST
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toughstuff
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Your voice
Its tone lined with malice
I can feel your hate,
it penetrates off of you
Silently you whisper,
"I want revenge"
My crimes
used to be so small
so fragile
Now I must wonder
have I left you numb?
At an odd angle you stand
lips pursed in anger
in hate
What good are my apologies?
For my apathetic roars just drip off of you
like blatant raindrops
So shallow and cold.
dead inside
I will wake up
and when I do....
The lies will be waiting to consume me.
Then I will be free.
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Inevitable
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2004-08-23 14:51:36]
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Re: Apathy will not win you freedom.
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by Lessa on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 03:11:06 AM AEST
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i really like this, i remember feeling this way once, i guess everyone has, some more extreem then others.
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Re: Apathy will not win you freedom.
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by buchi on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:52:22 PM AEST
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| These verses are exceedingly forcible...and this poem is nearly perfect in its way- the thoughts striking and natural- |
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