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Contributed by
Inevitable
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Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 02:26:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Lying here
blindly trying to forget
My mind is a mess
blank yet so dark
My heaving chest
among other things is normal,
compared to my constant defiance of these tears
If I'm so happy
why am I like this?
Rejecting the exit
immersed in invented fears
I can feel the wind
beneath my bare wounds...
but you said that they do not exist
Losing myself
I must concentrate
The truth is
I cannot wake up.
Not yet.
Copyright ©
Inevitable
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2004-08-23 14:26:17]
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Re: Not yet.
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by artostuff on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 02:46:02 PM AEST
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| I like the feeling in this. Good write. |
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Re: Not yet.
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by disillusioned on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 02:57:21 PM AEST
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Good job! The emotion conveyed by the poem is clear, which is sometimes a difficult thing to do, yet you did it very well.
Awesome poem.. Keep it up! |
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