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What a shame_______to smoke
Contributed by
artostuff
on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 11:27:44 AM in AEST
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What a shame indeed,
we let it go in a puff of hope,
clandestine embrosia in a tube
or a scotmens' tarten rope tied
up to the hilt with matching eyes
to button the hood.
What a shame indeed,
clinging on till the final round,
tales of fight and gore dismanteled
in a room full of dust, images
collected in soot, their wives
tassels draining air from life.
What a shame indeed,
that the man i loved said farewell
without his final smoke, the tears
he shed that night where this
words tied up in this throat. I
wiped them, now they're mine
to smoke imprinted on my soul,
at that moment the heavens let
out a sigh, pity for fates way and
tears to bleed roses white no
colour at the end only the infinite.
No shame today
I smoke his final words, buried in
me till the day I am set free
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artostuff
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2004-08-23 11:27:44]
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Re: What a shame_______to smoke
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 05:09:30 AM AEST
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| A powerful poem ... what a shame more people don't read these awesome words ... excellent write ... Jan |
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Re: What a shame_______to smoke
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 01:49:39 AM AEST
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| you are a powerful poet. you have strength in words. a distinctness all your own. much respect. |
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