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She
Contributed by
stevo7
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Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 09:01:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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/ She /
She is the wellspring of my eternity,
Giving something of herself,
That tiny thing inside which blossoms;
She is the essence of my joy for life,
From which the ever present laughter,
Lifts our souls aloft among the clouds;
Basking in the warmth of simple love,
She is the goddess of my delight,
Brightly shining on all our lives;
But one light in particular,
The one meant for me,
Is brighter than all the rest;
I succomb to the charm of her gaze,
And wonder to what depths our love,
And smile with our true understanding.
S.R. Bloodworth 9JUL04
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Re: She
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by Baronhawk on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 09:09:51 AM AEST
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Quite a rather tender expression here one that doth threatens to drag a soul sown into that sentimental moments in remembering the 'she' that they love...mostly to men of course... though you can't be sure in today's topsy turvy world.
Quite anchanting and engaging in a way... lshe..indeed. A rather delectably nice write write herein. Reminds me of one of my favourite songs...'SHE" by Elvis Costello....yes... that same kind of flair that doth tugs at the heartstrings...good job! |
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Re: She
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 02:22:15 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.....Lovely write.... Lukcy lady this....
Jenni |
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Re: She
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 02:22:15 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.....Lovely write.... Lukcy lady this....
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