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*****' Jaded God
Contributed by
ml02
on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 08:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Down on my knees
Begging
Pleading
Crying
Praying
Please
Not again
One day
Without
A broken bone
Or a black eye
Is that to much
To ask for?
*****' God
Are you even here
Or there
Do you like to see me cry
Do you get pleasure
From my pain
Am I such a sinner
That I got to repent
With *****' black eyes
And brocken bones
Is this all a game
That I gotta play
To get to heaven
If so
Then hell
Is lookin' pretty nice
You *****' jaded God
Helpin' eveyone
But *****' me
See me here
In the shower
Washing away
The blood
And the tears
I feel so dirty
Abused
And yet you leave me
Here
Alone
***** you
Too.
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ml02
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2002-11-02 20:30:00]
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Re: *****' Jaded God
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 01:31:08 AM AEST
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| So much pain in this write... =:( God gave you life and in time your prayers will be answered if you pray with an open heart... |
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Re: *****' Jaded God
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by Metalmouth666 on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 01:47:45 AM AEST
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| I know some people that go thrue this sh*t everyday, and the question of is god there I ask also. If it is any constalation to you this would make one hell of a song, but your work is your work. |
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Re: *****' Jaded God
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by Good_King_Bragi on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 02:59:18 AM AEST
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We live completely free of the intervention of the Gods. What heavens we enter, are but our own design. What hells we fall into, they too are but part of our creation.
Nobody should look up on God for help. We help ourselves.
Oneself is one's own saviour, for if one does not choose to be saved then who will? |
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