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Aim For The Smooth Glass Of Living

Contributed by inoc on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 07:22:40 AM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

Gasping for air can be a tragity
what's the meaning for this
capture the blessings
that hopefully come your way
before time runs out
then teach others the mysteries
the effort of life
bring happiness that can warrent the means
seldom do others care for your optimum of health
when they are blowing cigarette smoke down your throats
a terrible crime is with you
when someone is choking
who then cares for your wellbeing
teaming together and working it out
can help out tremendously
sharing the picture of success in the structure of our lives
work together and get the job done
before others are speculating the truth of dare
does anyone really care?
so lets look at the big picture
and stem the beads on the string of life
placing the pieces in there places
we might come to the conclusion
that life is rough and not a perfect picture
we have to take the rough road to appreciate
the smooth glass of living
so we can slide on the sloap of success
take the good times and the bad
all that we can bare
use moments at a time
when we reach
that gasping breath stage
thank God that we have used our lives
to the best of our ability
not dwindled them in a life of worry torment
so live and give that glimps of treasure
that will sparkle forever in your contented eyes!

Copyright © inoc ... [ 2004-08-23 07:22:40]
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Re: Aim For The Smooth Glass Of Living (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 01:55:52 PM AEST
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This is a good write.

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