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One
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Archie
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Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 04:49:54 AM in AEST
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One is for the holy one
God's only begotten son
Who for joy set before him
Hung on a tree by his limbs
We know the history
We call it legend
Caught in philosophy
We miss his lesson
Our obligation ever stands with in his words
To see the lessons that seem very hard to learn
One is for the holy one
Who is God's begotten son
Loved beyond what we call for
to bring us unto his shore
Defunct was my way unto Jesus had found me
He rescued me from my desastrous surroundings
Teaching me how to o're come all my sin
Setting examples worth emmulation
Leaving unrest behind for transformation
That is why I sing of him
because he loves me.
One is for the one called christ
Who endured to save my life
Then was risen back to life
and gives man eternal live
don't forget his sacrifice
Everyday that you live
Don't forget his love
Everything that you do
Do it because love
Copyright ©
Archie
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Re: One
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by venkat on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 05:41:59 AM AEST
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very delightful and also an adorable write..
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Re: One
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 05:57:59 AM AEST
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| I can't see that being a song, maybe a poem...but not a song. |
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Re: One
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by SlimStaple on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 06:02:02 AM AEST
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| oooooooooooook. Well I don't think tht would be a very good song. Um, god...eww. It would wor better as one of the god poems. |
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Re: One
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by inoc on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 07:30:00 AM AEST
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Lovely!!!
your love to God shines through this write
cheers! |
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Re: One
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by Willofree on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 10:11:21 AM AEST
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I'm not sure about the poetic or song style as I am new to writing poetry. But I do very much like the message and the wording of the work. I have written a few religious/spiritual poems, but have been a little hesitant to submit them.
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Re: One
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by Alina on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 10:52:55 AM AEST
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I don't realy know what to say about this song. I'm just glad that you have found Jesus Christ. I unfortunately haven't. I try and try over again ........ but nothing of importance seems to touch my heart. Well.... good write and keep up the good work!
ALIA ; ) |
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Re: One
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 01:57:47 PM AEST
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I think this would make an AWESOME song, since I have on many occasions LISTENED to Christian music. But to those who haven't a clue would see this as "a poem." I think singing praises to the Lord makes me respect you all the more as a human being, and writing it out makes me all warm inside!!! 0:-) I can say my poem Temptaions Garden got the least reads of any of my poems.So my friend, you know what people like and don't! I admire your perseverence! KEEP IT UP!
Angel always...godspeed my friend...joni |
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Re: One
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 02:03:19 PM AEST
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Wonderful Archie
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: One
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 02:57:29 PM AEST
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Oh ARchie, this was so touching, so heart wrenching........just so right! I loved the last where you stated so sincerely and so true.....do everything out of love.....for infact that is what he did for you!
You out did yourself on this one Archie.....it will always be one of my very favoriites!!!
Wonderfully stated, Wonderfully related!
love
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Re: One
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 12:35:39 AM AEST
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Very good writing!
A masterepice of our fathers luv.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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