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Redeeming Smile
Contributed by
Buggsy
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Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 01:39:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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My cold, blackened heart;
Penetrated by a smile;
Hope shall never fade.
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Buggsy
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2004-08-23 01:39:56]
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Re: Redeeming Smile
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by artostuff on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 03:42:09 AM AEST
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| i like the haiku, and i feel the title really adds some depth to it. |
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Re: Redeeming Smile
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 05:30:49 PM AEST
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| kind of inspirational. =] very nice indeed. you followed the 5/7/5 rules, had substance for words that werent just used to just follow the rules. thus a better haiku than usually made these days. |
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