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Dark Life
Contributed by
sidtim
on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 12:54:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Once life was gay,
Love,happiness-all there.
Now, its candle in storm
Whose light but has to die.
'Coz when your heart n' soul
Are stripped of all joy,
Left with just the old,happy-
Piercing,hurting memories.
What can you do, but
Resign yourself to destiny.
For devoid of love in life
A man is man no more.
He wants to believe-
Life will find light.
But darkness is so,so dark,
Hope is long dead in him.
And he can only cry.
Cry-yes he is man.
No,no,he is no coward,trust me.
He is bravest of all.
Copyright ©
sidtim
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2004-08-23 00:54:26]
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Re: Dark Life
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by Dizza_13 on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 01:28:20 AM AEST
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great write. Very emotional. i particularly liked the last
verse, very well done
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Re: Dark Life
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by artostuff on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 03:54:16 AM AEST
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| I like it. lonlieness can be self-destructive, though if we stand back from our misery we can see we're never truly alone |
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Re: Dark Life
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 07:07:45 AM AEST
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| Loved it, the last verse is genious |
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Re: Dark Life
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by inoc on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 07:26:27 AM AEST
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I honest write
well done
cheers! |
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Re: Dark Life
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by Willofree on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 10:24:59 AM AEST
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| A powerful message and I felt it was very well written. I agree that choosing life is the brave thing to do. We always have choices, but we need to guard against a totally negative perception and challange our negavatism. |
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