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A sister's last kiss
Contributed by
venkat
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Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 12:05:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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O mom, in our house darkness reigns
Please, light up a lamp with your smiles!
Has my dad not come? Some where I know
He is held up on his way, he will turn up at dawn
But don’t spill those tears, I love you mom always
I love dad and my little brother; mom, look at him,
He sleeps like a baby angel beautifully dreaming
I will carry him to school if I rise in the morning
Oh mom, in this gloom of night you are crying
Through fears of death your heart is wrenching
Perhaps I can not see your tears tomorrow, but
Mom, I am not afraid of death; in your heart
I shall live for ever through my love.
I won’t forget you even after my death
Believe me mom! I shall come back to you
And take rebirth as your baby by grace of God
Oh mom, outside the beautiful moon still shines
Twinkling stars shine like many diamond flowers
Mom, here comes the glowing red chariot of Dawn
Blazing with fiery flames; and the stars are crying,
The angels are coming; they will take me far away
Dear mom, before I leave you all, I want to hug you
And to kiss my little brother; I want to see my daddy
As I take leave, now bid me farewell with tears of love!
-The girl said good bye to her mother and left to Heaven-
The sun that rose with reddened eyes was in a dilemma
Whether he should start his journey on that morning
Or he should mourn the demise of an angel by hiding
Behind the clouds that covered the eastern horizon!
23-8-2004
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venkat
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2004-08-23 00:05:33]
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Re: A sister's last kiss
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 12:09:04 AM AEST
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Venkat, this is so amazingly beautiful. The tears are streaming down my cheeks. It is hard to lose anyone, but to lose a beloved child is almost more than one can bear. She was strong and glorious in the eyes of the heavens. She will come again.
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Re: A sister's last kiss
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 12:13:43 AM AEST
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Oh Venkat...only you can take a tragedy and make it sound so beautiful.... I especially loved the ending.......
Thank you for sharing this..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: A sister's last kiss
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by artostuff on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 04:23:34 AM AEST
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| This truly is a wonderful and touching poem! Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: A sister's last kiss
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by pixie on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 05:43:24 AM AEST
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awwww Venkat I don't know what to say apart from you have the ability to make anything sound so beautiful, what a touching write,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: A sister's last kiss
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by bernard on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 05:57:39 AM AEST
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| May your soul find peace. God Bless from bernard. |
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Re: A sister's last kiss
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by hooray_its_jen on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 07:49:23 AM AEST
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This was hard for me to read, but I'm glad I did. It brings back a lot of memories, but you somehow make it all seem better.
Beautiul write, Venkat. I will treasure this poem forever.
Blessings
Love, Jenna |
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Re: A sister's last kiss
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by Kie on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 08:53:11 AM AEST
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This is one of those poems that will bring tears to the eyes of all readers. It just moved me beyond words.
Kie |
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Re: A sister's last kiss
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 09:07:13 AM AEST
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beautiful and an amazing write.
again you did an excellent job..
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Re: A sister's last kiss
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 01:21:44 PM AEST
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A true artwork of design. This poem spells pain and anguish, yet releases an inner joy of knowing one is at peace in the arms of the heavens. It is sad when we lose someone, hard to deal with, but when the angels open their wings, and we feel comforted by them, then we can go on, knowing the heavens listen to our sorrowful hearts.
Beautiful my friend, Many blessings to you!!!
Angel Always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: A sister's last kiss
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by Archie on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 02:02:34 PM AEST
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| If I had a child who was dying I could not bear to have him say these words to me. This is a very goos write and portrays courage and love. |
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Re: A sister's last kiss
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by Whisper on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 07:22:17 PM AEST
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Interesting write .I makes me think of another Land with war and struggle and how the innocents suffer.
Whisper |
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Re: A sister's last kiss
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 10:13:58 PM AEST
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| So very touching I couldnt help but cry! It made me think of my mom & My kids! So very sad! Christina |
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Re: A sister's last kiss
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 10:40:16 PM AEST
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goodness man this was heartwrenching I
felt tears come to my eyes as I read this. I
loved the darkness, pain, and hope that was
expressed throughout. You draw me into your
poems time and time again so it is hard to
say which of your masterpieces is my
favourite, but I am glad I didn't miss this one. Ah man this was just plain beautiful.
Bobo (Joel)
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Re: A sister's last kiss
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by emystar on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 10:50:20 PM AEST
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Very touching, moving write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: A sister's last kiss
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by arden on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 12:45:31 AM AEST
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i do not have words for the beauty of which i just read.
this was truely amazing my friend. so sad yet to stunning.
i loved this write. well done.
5 stars
Arden |
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Re: A sister's last kiss
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 08:32:57 AM AEST
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breathtaking and heartwrenching at same time truly one of your best
Shari |
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Re: A sister's last kiss
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 12:10:40 PM AEST
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tears falling down my face, i lost 3 babies and this poem spoke volumes to me, warmed my heart too, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: A sister's last kiss
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by kalika_vidya on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 02:30:12 AM AEST
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| My eyes are filled with tears..you haver told us your childhood memories.A master piece indeed a perfect art work..:-)K |
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Re: A sister's last kiss
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:42:50 PM AEST
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Oh Venkat I've lost three children......is there anything more painful? This was really really sad!
But done beautifully just the same
ConSue
Your poor poor mother! |
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Re: A sister's last kiss
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 02:37:34 AM AEST
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An amazing write.
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Re: A sister's last kiss
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by thumper on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 07:33:27 AM AEST
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Ohhh, such tragedy! I don't know if this was from a true experience or not, but you painted the picture well. The ending was the coup de maitre!! Bravo Bravo Bravo
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Re: A sister's last kiss
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 03:15:48 AM AEST
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Very emotional, wonderful poem...
Mom, here comes the glowing red chariot of Dawn
Blazing with fiery flames; and the stars are crying,
The angels are coming; they will take me far away
Achingly beautiful...
Hugs,
Hur
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Re: A sister's last kiss
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by Archie on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 07:54:16 AM AEST
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| You always know how to touch the heart. I am very glad to read you poetry. |
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