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Hello, I Missed You
Contributed by
waos
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Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 11:43:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Hello, I missed you.
I'm glad you never leave for long.
Hello, I missed you.
Please help me feel strong.
Please hurt me, I need you.
Don't leave me here alone.
Please hurt me, I need you.
Just ignore me as I groan.
I'm sorry I left you, don't leave me.
You're always there when I call.
I'm sorry I left you, don't leave me.
You're always there at the bottom when I fall.
Hello, I missed you.
I'm glad you're always here.
Hello, I missed you.
You're all I never fear.
Please hurt me, I need you.
I need to feel the pain.
Please hurt me, I need you.
I need to fall again.
I'm sorry I left you, don't leave me.
Please release what I keep inside.
I'm sorry I left you, don't leave me.
I promise I'll never hide.
Hello, I missed you;
please hurt me, I need you.
I'm sorry I left you, don't leave me.
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waos
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Re: Hello, I Missed You
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by sheri on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 12:25:36 AM AEST
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| Very good job in expressing your need to release your pain through self injury, I too used to practice self injury. Please talk to someone so you don't hurt yourself anymore. |
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Re: Hello, I Missed You
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by Dizza_13 on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 01:39:47 AM AEST
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great work here. I like the way you repeated the first
line in each verse. i too have felt like this before, but
self hurt is not the answer.
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Re: Hello, I Missed You
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by Archie on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 04:24:24 AM AEST
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| I like this poem, I just hope you are not asking some one to hurt you. No relationship is worth that. |
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Re: Hello, I Missed You
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by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 10:28:52 PM AEST
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I can relate to this poem very very well....read my poem missed pain...its alot like this one....awesome job....great write
Lots of Love
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