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Bleeding Away The Tears
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 09:56:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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cut
cut yourself deep
release it all in a silent scream
try
try to hold back
your pain does not make your heart grow black
fly
fly yourself gone
to a place where life never seems wrong
see
see the mirror
and notice that your not a horror
smile
smile your heart some
your beauty will be held for someone
stop
stop right away
regretful scars will follow you everyday
hold
hold your chin up
tell the razors youve had enough
break
break old habits
tears of pain become tears of gladness
look
look around you
open arms and outstretched hands to
safe
safe are you child
the broken skin will be gone in a while
truth
truth you dont see
i used to be you, you used to be me
Copyright ©
abnormalpunk
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2004-08-22 21:56:12]
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Re: Bleeding Away The Tears
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by Flipped_out on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 02:39:15 AM AEST
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Punk
What can I say...this is just beyond words
I feel you, this packs a punch, never having self harmed . I can almost feel pain..Excellent!!!!
More like this and I might kiss you
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Re: Bleeding Away The Tears
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by skyblumoon on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 03:35:56 PM AEST
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Bravo! What a way to capture the one who harms them selves. Excellent write.
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Re: Bleeding Away The Tears
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by russ-dawg on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 12:19:39 AM AEST
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| that was a great poem i used to srape myself that way it would be easyer to hide what i had done and it was just as calming but i quit and i am glad! again i really liked your poem it was good and had great meaning!!! |
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