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Short of Breath
Contributed by
Diatribe
on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 09:49:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Oh, how I want to hold you so tightly
Like lounges collapsing
So close that I can almost
Taste the air that you cannot breathe
and how I wish
That you weren’t so claustrophobic
I want to wrap you in cellophane
And drain every beat of your heart
I’ll cut a hole
Where your mouth is supposed to be
And around your toe
I’ll tie a string
Where the tag is meant to read
My name
Cheers to a shot of embalming fluid
I knew you’d come around
I just knew it
And your choice of make-up
Is such a lovely shade
Could you dance lifeless?
My beautiful puppet
Could you sing for me?
Without the air that you need
I’d be so happy
Copyright ©
Diatribe
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2004-08-22 21:49:05]
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Re: Short of Breath
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 10:52:49 PM AEST
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| Intense and graphic, an awesome write.it had me on the edge of my seat, very vivid. |
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Re: Short of Breath
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by skyblumoon on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 03:30:35 PM AEST
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Bravo! Well done! What a beautiful masterpiece.
Blu |
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Re: Short of Breath
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by Diatribe on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 10:44:45 PM AEST
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| LUNGS... not lounges lol... sorry (i feel like a dumbass) |
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Re: Short of Breath
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by littlemo911 on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 05:29:28 AM AEST
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| feels a little morbid, but its good. its intense. :D |
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