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internet love
Contributed by
veramouse
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Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:58:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
InternetLove
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log on...
He says that he loves you
you say the same
its a fantasy world
its only a game
both of you know what the score is in life
you have a husband, he has a wife
its fun while it lasts, just dont get sucked in
nothing is real, so dont believe him
never lose sight of those that are true
the real ones who's lives revolve around you
the ones you depend on for love and support
worth more than the players who do it for sport
remember to keep it all in its place
for real love is something he cant replace
log off...
Copyright ©
veramouse
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2004-08-22 17:58:44]
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Re: internet love
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by neglected1 on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 06:33:43 PM AEST
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This is so true... its like people want to live a long lost distant dream ... and a dream/fantasy is all this is... i really liked how you incorporated the log on and log off...
luck to you
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Re: internet love
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by Jenn2004 on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 06:46:42 PM AEST
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| Good poem, that is so true. I was getting to write a poem on internet love too. |
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Re: internet love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 08:43:54 PM AEST
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AMEN! You cannot live forever in cyberspace. I think it quite a dangerous and sad game to play with emotions.
Rita |
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Re: internet love
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 02:43:38 PM AEST
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Very well written. Easy, comfortable flow. Great sentiment. I enjoyed this read greatly !!
Thank you
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: internet love
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by Bruce on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 04:59:11 AM AEST
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| how true again, fantastic write |
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