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blood letters these letters to you
Contributed by
grip-wth-broken-fingers
on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 06:06:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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on the wall are blood letters
blood letters to you
on the floor are blood smothered blades
to write the letters to you
letters from my heart which have no reply
so i go on cutting deeper with nothing not even a sigh
can't you hear my blood dripping
falling for you
on my grave is gold letters
letters from you
you said you were sorry
i wish that you'd knew
you received all my letters
blood letters to you
but now i am gone
these letters haunt you
blood letters from the heart
now these words will never faid away
as i took them to my grave
now you will know hwo it feels
but i never meant to haunt you.
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2004-08-22 06:06:51]
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Re: blood letters these letters to you
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 07:42:58 AM AEST
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Blood letters, a good way to get to the point, not a bad poem, The imagary, was intense though i'll give it that.
Good write keep it up.
ps: I apoligise if this isnt what you want to here, but I prefer an honest comment not the other way round. |
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Re: blood letters these letters to you
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by Katie2008 on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 08:57:55 AM AEST
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I like this, it's very original. I can picture this all happening. Good job
Katie |
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