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I Remember
Contributed by
Jenn2004
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Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:13:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Where was you when I went through this hell,
I remember the pain u put me through all to well,
Those days are gone, it isnt the same,
At night, i wake up, and call out your name,
But i forget youre not even there,
After all the hurt, i cant believe i still care,
I dont know why i ever gave you the time of day,
I remember the days when we use to fight and play,
I still remember the days when you said i was the one,
I remember the days when we had alot of fun,
I remember our late night talks,
during the summer, i remember our walks,
I remember at work, we would laugh the night away,
I still remember all the crazy things you would say,
I also remember when u took your love away,
Those Memories will always stay stuck in my head,
Ill never forget the things that you said.
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Jenn2004
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Re: I Remember
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by venkat on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:20:43 AM AEST
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| well written...keep writing on..venkat |
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Re: I Remember
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by artostuff on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:21:37 AM AEST
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| touching poem for those that have lost. memories as these are as mimes walls, only to real when surounded by them and at the same time a whisper of nothing. |
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Re: I Remember
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by Archie on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:29:13 AM AEST
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| A broken heart will always leave you feeling jaded and it is hard to move on even when we know we must |
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Re: I Remember
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by pixie on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:32:01 AM AEST
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a very touching write from the heart, look forward to reading more from you,
pixie xx |
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Re: I Remember
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 06:40:35 AM AEST
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Nice work
Hope to see you writing about the love of your life on here one day too !!
Steve |
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Re: I Remember
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 08:33:12 AM AEST
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| A sad dipliction, of harsh relationship realities, awesome poem Jenn, Keep on writing. |
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Re: I Remember
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by emystar on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 03:40:08 AM AEST
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Awesome writing.
Ya know the memories linger even tho time flys by.
Awesome writing and I certainly can relate to this one in a big way.
luv, huggs, strength,
emy |
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Re: I Remember
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by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 12:54:50 PM AEST
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WHoaa i don't even know wwhat to say because this is what i'm feeling... You are an amazing write, i don't think you need me to tell you that.. Keep up the great work... Wonderful amazing great write
UnknOwN BuTtErFly |
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