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Contributed by
artostuff
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Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 04:42:41 AM in AEST
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Yet the walls cave in fallen
cienna leaves to a whim,
Ah! see again and see
those that cannot,
they are those sewn
in as kings in
stone tombs to
suffocate through
eternity with there
prize jewels.
Copyright ©
artostuff
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2004-08-22 04:42:41]
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Re: no title
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by Dizza_13 on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:25:07 AM AEST
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very good write. I look forward to reading your next
poem, so far i've seen each poem get better than the
last. Keep em comin
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Re: no title
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by venkat on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 04:34:21 AM AEST
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ha,ha..kings in stone tombs. good imagery
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