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Contributed by Mick_Puttock on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 03:52:13 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Is it you? for I know its not me
Are you afraid of what could be?
Is this why the sudden change in you?
That has made my family now so blue

Are you afraid of what had begun?
Of what our friendship could have become?
The feelings you had beginning for the kids
Is this what made you put on the skids?

Is your life so well planned out?
That within you refuse to doubt
Mustn’t take life as it comes
Stick to the plan, one by one

Despite how you feel or think
There’s one thing you now know
The children and myself you see
We all love you ever so.

Be it only ever as a friend
Or by miracle something more
It would make us all real happy
Just please do not ignore







Copyright © Mick_Puttock ... [ 2004-08-22 03:52:13]
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by Chrissylee on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 04:21:02 AM AEST
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aww mick lovely write, i sure hope this person sees what they will miss if they don't follow there heart..well done


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by venkat on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:28:34 AM AEST
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"The children and myself you see..We all love you ever so"..we hope she will realise what she is missing..this is well written ..very lovely poem. venkat



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by Dizza_13 on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:29:10 AM AEST
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beautiful, a lovely write

dizza


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by Archie on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:32:25 AM AEST
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This is a very good poem. It seems by your poem that things are not going well. I hope things work out. And thanks for giving me a place to post my poetry and music.


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by pixie on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:34:00 AM AEST
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great write Mick,

Despite how you feel or think
There’s one thing you now know
The children and myself you see
We all love you ever so.

I especially loved this stanza *hugs*

pixie xx


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by jmpy84 on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:49:13 AM AEST
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great write
had good emotion


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by Ilhar on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 06:23:21 AM AEST
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heartfelt write...

Shari


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by Jenni_K on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 10:54:33 AM AEST
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(((((((((((((((((((Hugs)))))))))))))))
Jen


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by sweetangeluk on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 01:19:21 PM AEST
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Hope it works out well for you and the children Mick.
I pray your love is blessed

Wonderful poem

Love Sweetangelukxxxxxx


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by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 02:08:30 PM AEST
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I do know this kind of pain and the loss it causes. I will just have to echo Jenni.

(((((((((((((((((((Hugs)))))))))))))))

Rita


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by shelby on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 03:26:46 PM AEST
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Mick this is heartfelt and your right one shouldnt ignore

(so if this someone is reading) go talk to Mick and the children dont leave them out in the rain feeling sad and blue without a reason as to why)

anyway Mick you know where I spend most of my time feel free to mail me anytime Im here for you!

Hugs 4 you and the kiddlings
Michelle


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by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 11:03:34 PM AEST
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AAWW I hope things work out Mick you dont need this nor does the kids! Give em hugs from me! They are whats important now! Good luck! Christina


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by Kindredblood_dragon on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:28:29 AM AEST
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Awesome write, I hope that the person you all love or friend sees this, to know what they will miss, and I hope that they do not ignore what you and the kids have obvisouly built up, you dont deserve such agonies of a broken heart.
Take Care always


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by inoc on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 06:39:33 AM AEST
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WONDERFULLY WRITTEN
[You sound like a great person friend and father..]
all the best for all your tomorrows....
we are thinking of you and hope your precious family will be okay!
cheers!




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