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YOU!
Contributed by
FiggySue
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Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 02:48:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Your the song in my head that I cannot stop singing,
Your the nightmare I cannot stop dreaming.
Your the one I dream of while I'm holding him near.
Your the one who's voice I long to hear.
Your the one who brings me so much pain.
Your the one who drives me insane.
Your the one I think of, when the music is slow.
Your the one I that I just can't seem to let go.
Your face branded in my mind, in my heart.
Your memory the one that tears my world apart.
Your the one that took my happiness away.
Yet your the one I love, still today!
Copyright ©
FiggySue
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2004-08-22 02:48:32]
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Re: YOU!
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by emystar on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 02:53:26 AM AEST
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Very good!
Congradulations. U r one of the lucky ones.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: YOU!
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by Chrissylee on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 04:24:49 AM AEST
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| Love can be everything nice and it can also cause so much pain but here you have taken all the hurt and pain and put it together ever so nicely... well done |
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Re: YOU!
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by Jenn2004 on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 04:27:58 AM AEST
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| Good job, that poem almost made me cry cause i feel like that about my x. |
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Re: YOU!
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by Stellar on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 10:42:16 PM AEST
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Great poem! I hope some day you're able to let go.
Take care : ) |
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Re: YOU!
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:36:16 PM AEST
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beautifully moving, hugs n' love nessa
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