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First Night
Contributed by
Stellar
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Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 12:20:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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He leads me by hand to an uncharted place
I'm lost in his world as he explores my face
His fingers flow down my skin like a winding river
Our clothes fall to the floor and my whole body shivers
So gentle is his touch, his kisses like feathers
Chills course through my veins and our lips join together
The night comes alive and the stars catch fire
My emotions have peaked yet he still takes me higher
Then all becomes quiet, not a sound in the air
He kisses my lips, softly touching my hair
Nothing was so beautiful or quite as divine
As the first night our hearts and souls were aligned
Copyright ©
Stellar
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2004-08-22 00:20:30]
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Re: First Night
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by MnMnMsrcool on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 01:00:58 AM AEST
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| omg!! that was sooo sweet i loved it...it was really nice and very well written good job and keep writing |
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Re: First Night
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by veramouse on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 01:16:04 AM AEST
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| fabulous poem , there are some things that are etched into your memory forever, it brought back memories for me... |
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Re: First Night
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by FiggySue on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 02:54:59 AM AEST
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| Perfect! You made it seem so magical, and exciting. Beautiful poem!!! |
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Re: First Night
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 11:09:42 AM AEST
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i like this one..You and I have alot in common...
AfterDark.. |
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