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sex
Contributed by
cauchy3
on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 10:29:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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sex (poem)
Your magic is for me to sure
Your bodies are truth that used
I put your heels to your shoes
But they are the lips of the bodies
The games are winning of joys in nudities
Happiness is come inside nuts
Passionate lips are hunts in huts
Scents and traces are to consist
Each label a lovable mark
Temper the flows of loves in masses
Treat your bodies as for sues
Take apart your judges as suits
So many rules are fall off
You and me have to dressed down
Your lips are not empty in our minds
Your gifts that given as bodies are mine
My loves are melted as latexes that boiled
My acts are sides of south winds
It is below the teases of wills
We wet her flowers in no rivers
Deface and deflower but men s vim
Stops are to call off the bids
Mistresses are stars above moons
Loves and cares are nifty moods
I do not harsh to grip on arms
I stoke with pinks to paints
Your pines are your senses of high
Our joys but not nails are admitted
In abysms I grip one angel
On rivers waters run in angles
The worlds are perverted but humble
Pipes in apples are under touches
Moons are crawlers on magic skies
Is bright lights are so shy
Shades of darks are like whips
Never sweep away loves in flirtations
Childs in brains are loves that floated
A humble me stand in oaks
But shrug and shudders are allowed
Some mystiques are magic in adults
Could not avoid the loves that handled
All seasons are tasteful to anticipate
The mot for lives is on your tokens
Two nuts are soft as fused in one
-------By lonely man -----Cheung shun sang=cauchy3
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Re: sex
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stoney1 on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 02:21:51 AM AEST (User
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There's just one word that I can think of to describe your poetry - inscrutable. *s*
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Re: sex
(User Rating: 1 ) by spyke_420 on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 07:55:32 PM AEST (User
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I just ahve to say that I loved it.... it was so deep and passonite.. |
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Re: sex
(User Rating: 1 ) by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 07:49:08 PM AEST (User
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Ummm, I'm not sure if i understood that very well. |
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Re: sex
(User Rating: 1 ) by BlindRomantic on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:48:58 AM AEST (User
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never been there. wouldn't know. |
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Re: sex
(User Rating: 1 ) by Poetic_Influence on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 10:01:11 PM AEST (User
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good poem but i hate when ppl use words like sex,or anything like that to make thier poem read, like its beggin for attention |
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Re: sex
(User Rating: 1 ) by lilch4ever on
Sunday, 30th July 2006 @ 07:43:29 PM AEST (User
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Hey I thought the poem was good but I didn't understand it to be honest. I loved the way it flowed. Hard to do I may add. It was really good. Nice job. |
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Re: sex
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 05:42:54 PM AEST (User
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I loved the imagery expressed in this poem. this ewas very sensual poem and i loved it! |
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Re: sex
(User Rating: 1 ) by Channing on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 04:43:14 PM AEST (User
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Interesting... |
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Re: sex
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 08:09:11 AM AEST (User
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Very interesting subject and poem.
Jeff |
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Re: sex
(User Rating: 1 ) by MoonlightKiss on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 12:08:49 PM AEST (User
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wow great write lol! the title made me laugh |
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Re: sex
(User Rating: 1 ) by windowguy on
Tuesday, 12th May 2009 @ 04:40:21 AM AEST (User
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Happy poem??? Didn't unerstand it! It's like reading something that's been badly translated from a foreign language. As for the title..a real turn off. |
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Re: sex
(User Rating: 1 ) by DarkWolf on
Monday, 19th April 2010 @ 11:53:18 AM AEST (User
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Um...Yeah...About that... |
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