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Evening in the Graveyard: Part Three (The Conclusion)
Contributed by
kailadragon
on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 09:40:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I scream ever louder
as the cold metal digs
deeper
into my chest
hoping someone will hear it
for a scream is only heard
by those destined to hear it
but noone comes
to my rescue
as my black blood
spills over
and my mystery
watches, enthralled
as my last bit of life squirms from me
leaving me an empty
hollow shell
of what once was
the Past
................
the mystery smiles, removing her mask
showing my face
the face of my present
the face of my future
and no longer
the face of my past
Copyright ©
kailadragon
... [
2004-08-21 21:40:55]
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Re: Evening in the Graveyard: Part Three (The Conclusion)
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 12:23:09 AM AEST
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i read all three pieces to this poem...and i have to say that was awesome....bone chilling...excellent job!!
Lots of Love
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Re: Evening in the Graveyard: Part Three (The Conclusion)
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by shorty_52 on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 06:46:33 PM AEST
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this was good. a good way to end it.
i enjoyed all three. keep up the good work
~allyson~ |
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